"She's trying so hard to let go but hold on" - were do you come up with this stuff?!?! I'm blown away, your work always comes out so beautifully, I wish I had written that line;)

I hate how u right poems, that i hate what there about but love the actual poem!

I think this poem is the best i have read of yours. i dont knwo what to say about it. its just... i dont know. :( so so well written and just .. each line brings a new tear. well done i really do like this one xxxx

Gabby.i love this poem.there's such a touch of everything that is you.....and i have a gentle, solid hand.......5/5......xoxoxo

Good.... i like this one ^^

This poem simply amazes me. The wording is incredible and everything seems so far fetched yet it makes complete sense at the same time. The last stanza was my absolute favorite though. I love the way you ended it. 5/5