Dear God

by abullettotheheart   Apr 5, 2008


If roses grow in heaven
lord please pick a bunch for me
place them in my mothers arms
and tell her the're from me
tell her i love her
and that i miss her
and when she turns to go
place a kiss upon her cheek
and hold her for a while
because remembering her is easy
i do it every day
but theres an ache within my heart
becuase i cant hold her in my arms like you can.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aubrey

    That was amazing.
    I loved it so much, I put you on my favorite authors list.
    One thing I love about your writing is the symbolism you have in a lot of it.
    And just the over all effect on how you describe things so clearly.
    It makes me picture it.
    You hold a talent. Congrats.

  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    Wow.... very touching and very powerful. I loved it i could feel the emotion... great job and keep it up

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by fragiledoll

    Amazing poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    Thank you this poem came from the heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awwww....this is so sweet, it made me cry. I love how you said that you wanted God to pick some roses for your mom. I'm sorry for your loss, you wrote these words with passion, and I admire this poem so much. I have lost a loved one too, please keep writing, nice job!