Wow. lol I think that maybe I should go take a shower right now. lol That was so good. I was like more more please. I think that u should make a part 2 when ur sisters bf comes and u guys have a threesome. It doesn't have 2 be real but I think that it would get hot from there. But it's up 2 u. This was really good. 5/5 I wrote a new poem and I was wondering if u could read it. I hope that u will like it. It's called Our Ecstasy. Please and thank u =)

Very detailed, dirty kinky all the things you need in an erotic write, i always say, with erotic ones.........If they turn you on its a poem well done!!!!! Loved the detail in it

That was effin hot.. me and girlfriend are having sex to it. ;]

That was effin hot.. me and girlfriend are having sex to it. ;]

I liked it. and the sisters boyfriend walking in?
that's priceless and hilarious!
haha. :D

Wooowwww loved it so hot and sexi

DAMN..SHORTY THAT WAS THE BEST!! mESSAGE ME i THINK WE SHOULD TALK!!

Wow...thats all i can say..wow

CURL YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE YOU GOT ME SOOOOOOOOOOO HORNY RIGHT NOW

Great Work!!!