This Little Feeling So Deep Inside

by Blue   Apr 5, 2008


I have this little feeling, so deep inside

It's a part of me, that no one can see

It controls my life, when I get weak

It knocks me down, down to the ground

If I don't get up, I cannot survive,

unless I hide, my tears, my thoughts,

my pain, my confusion of why

why am I crying, why am I alone

why can't I be happy

all's I want Is to be happy,

to love someone and beloved

to have people there, to have friends to care

for me as I do them,

but I push everyone away, never can they stay

never can I be happy, until I am one day

I'll fight this little feeing, so deep inside,

until the day I die, never will I try to die,

because I know , what does not kill me, will only

make me stronger!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blue

    I wrote this on a Saturday night when all my friends were asking me to come drink with them. I was too down, i usually never edit my work, i only write when I’m either crying, really sad, thinking about someone until I’m black n blue, or depressed.. I guess I could prolly think more clearly when I’m none of the above. And possibly edit my work if it’s choppy because of the circumstances. Thanks for your impute. I’ll keep that in-mind for my future work.

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    I liked this poem, can relate to it in a way. so good job, i give it a 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Umm again it was ok not the best and yes everyone know saddness will make them stronger life can make you stronger..but some ppl it makes them weak! i really think if you used bigger words it would be alot better

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