This is my first poem eve.. n i wrote this wen i was away frm ma bf.. i really lurv him n cldnt bear the pain of seperation n ended up penning down my feelings for him through this poem.. wil appreciate any comment.. thank you...!!!

This is my first poem eve.. n i wrote this wen i was away frm ma bf.. i really lurv him n cldnt bear the pain of seperation n ended up penning down my feelings for him through this poem.. wil appreciate any comment.. thank you...!!!