by Teria Apr 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
new love
When I'm With You. |
by Brittany C
I like this one a lot. I can relate to it. I saw nothing that needed to be fixed. Everything was great. 5/5 Sorry that I don't have more to say. |
I loved the Flow of this poem. I really enjoyed the use of a question. I've tried that in some of my poem and I just cant get it to work. Great job with the expression of feeling I totally get every thing your saying with out even looking back and trying to think of what you meant to see. |
by Robert
The expression in this poem was very well thought out and the flow was good I liked the way the flow went good job all and all Plot121 |
by Hollywood
I really have not much to say every one already took it your really great and i hope there will be alot more to read! |
This is a confusing piece.I notice that the missing word is obviously love, and the way you use it as a blank only leaving clues to what it could be. Like as you describe it as an emotion that you feel everytime he's around you and the roses and the octagon and the obsessions, brilliant 5/5 !props! |