Waw, its nice way to right like you dont got the words and confused all this you feel when you got him inside you and i can say its true as i felt that before, sometimes its hard to write how exactly the feeling in this time,well done .
i like it and enjoyed 5/5

I like the whole concept of this piece. The repetition is truly effective, it added powerful impact to the flow and the atmosphere of this piece.
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- It`s like octagon and roses that line a wall of doubt,-
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amazing, truly mind-blowing. Fantastically said.

My favorite stanza is:

- It`s the emotion that I feel every time you`re near me,
The voice inside my head screaming, " love me, love me".
My emptiness is filled at the sound of your name -
Yet, I still can`t trust that this isn`t some kind of game.-
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You portrayed emotions excellently here. Every line is heartfelt and greatly written.

I like your writing style, you managed to portray feelings along with good imagery in each stanza. Whole poem is very creative and refreshing, truly enjoyable read.
You did good job with rhymes, too, and this piece flows flawlessly from the beginning to the end.

Keep up!
5/5 from me

That's an amazing poem. and these questions are so catchy and you don't just say about your feelings directly like in a common poem and this allusion is so great.
roses you mention in some lines are a symbol of love, and such small prompts work here so great, and the emotion through the poem is very strong and very life-like.
ryhm is a bit off in some places like in the 4th stanza but i think it's ok because you describe very mixed ans obsessive feelings
and back again to the question, the very last one: "what summarises all of this?" not only tells what love means to you, but also kinda asks a reader "what love means to YOU? do you feel the same way or not?" and this kind of dialogue makes the poem so unique.
5/5

"I feel a little bit obsessive, and as if I need professionals,
and I sometimes when I'm with you I can`t make any sense -
Now I`m at a loss for words on how you make me feel,
it`s like octagon and roses that line a wall of doubt.

And, side to side they`re filled with pools and pools of _:
what`s that words again? . . .
that summarizes all of this?"

Just a few mistakes I've noticed are "What's that words again?" It should be 'What's that word again?' And then maybe you do mean to say 'octagon' instead of 'octagons', but that doesn't seem very correct, or you could say 'an octagon'.
The part about 'professionals' also sort of confused me, but I didn't notice any mistakes in that.

Anyways...
I really did love this poem, even though a few of the lines didn't make much sense, the idea behind it was just wonderful.
It also flowed amazingly well, you didn't seem to have an exact structure for it [or maybe you did and I just don't know it] but it seemed perfectly effortless anyhow, and was really pleasing to read.

The last and first stanzas were also my absolute favorite, people don't tend to write their poems like that, and that uniqueness about this one I really loved.
5/5
~gabriella

This is a confusing piece.I notice that the missing word is obviously love, and the way you use it as a blank only leaving clues to what it could be. Like as you describe it as an emotion that you feel everytime he's around you and the roses and the octagon and the obsessions, brilliant 5/5 !props!

I really have not much to say every one already took it your really great and i hope there will be alot more to read!

The expression in this poem was very well thought out and the flow was good I liked the way the flow went good job all and all Plot121

I loved the Flow of this poem. I really enjoyed the use of a question. I've tried that in some of my poem and I just cant get it to work. Great job with the expression of feeling I totally get every thing your saying with out even looking back and trying to think of what you meant to see.
Great Write
Emma 5/5

I like this one a lot. I can relate to it. I saw nothing that needed to be fixed. Everything was great. 5/5 Sorry that I don't have more to say.