You Save Me

by Tiffany   Apr 5, 2008


All my life
I have been hiding,
Hiding from whats inside.
But ever since I meet you,
I don't hide any more.
Im happy inside and out.
You have brought me to life.
You have taken this broken life and gave it life.

I never thought I'd see the day
Were I smile just because some one else smiles.
I laugh because I want to,
Not because I need to.

You have made my world complete.
You are the angel God sent to me,
To help me live again.
To take away my pain
To hold me and tell me
It's all gonna be okay.

I love you
And Im so happy I have you
Because Id still be my broken self,
Lieing to every one around me
And pretending that I was happy
If you were not here by my side.

I am now living,
I am now alive.
Im not broken any more
Because you have saved me
And you have made me feel alive again.
I love you Justin,
More then words can say!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Oh, nice job! I really liked the third stanza, but you did an awesome job on the other ones.

    "But ever since I meet you"
    meet should be met

    "Were I smile just because some one else smiles."
    Were should be Where

    In the poem you have Id and Im
    This is how it should be: I'd and I'm

    Otherwise, I love what you're saying here, and good luck with you and Justin. Take care!