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by Poet on the Piano
Oh, nice job! I really liked the third stanza, but you did an awesome job on the other ones. "But ever since I meet you" meet should be met "Were I smile just because some one else smiles." Were should be Where In the poem you have Id and Im This is how it should be: I'd and I'm Otherwise, I love what you're saying here, and good luck with you and Justin. Take care!