Comments : You Save Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Oh, nice job! I really liked the third stanza, but you did an awesome job on the other ones.

    "But ever since I meet you"
    meet should be met

    "Were I smile just because some one else smiles."
    Were should be Where

    In the poem you have Id and Im
    This is how it should be: I'd and I'm

    Otherwise, I love what you're saying here, and good luck with you and Justin. Take care!