Comments : Ode to Spring (Collab RTVW)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The words you have all penned in this piece are breathtakingly beautiful. I can smell the sweet smell of the flowers in bloom and visualize the birds, lambs, bees, frogs, butterflies and dragonflies as though I were actually taking a walk though this lovely scene you have all created.

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!

    A beautifully penned "Ode to Spring" ..... and a wonderful refreshing read.
    The imagery is simply magical .... the read delightful !
    Awesome job :Kay, Cindy, Frank, Rachel, Hellon & Jeannie !

    ~Applauds well deserved~
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!
    ^^^
    Sorry I meant 6 ... my bad oops .... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree, very well written and by so many hands yet it seems like one voise. good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    Loved doing this ode to spring with all my RTVW family :)
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Marvellous job

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is a very beautiful piece... Such a lovely picture has been created... the beauty of nature has been so well described...

    The imagery is perfect... Your poem made me miss spring so much..

    Excellent job... Brilliant...