The Sadness

by Amber   Apr 5, 2008


Sadness, Oh how it overflows
my body. It runs in my blood
like a toxic, like a virus, a
killer virus.

I try so hard to fight it
off to push it out of my
blood that it is poisoning.

I can only fight it off for
so long until I give up
from exhaustion, from hiding
this sadness within my veins
with a fake smile.

The Sadness keeps working its
way up to my heart. Taking
free rides from my blood.

Slowly...
Slowly...
It gets closer to my heart.

My heart screams out
for me to help. I try and try
but I am a failure.

I let The Sadness wash over
my already broken heart.

It devours my hearts greedily
but slowly. Making sure to savor
every piece of sadness and misery
that I have had in my life.

Finally it devours my last
piece taking along with it
my soul and my life.

Leaving me lifeless onto
the ground just waiting for
the next person, the next
victim, who touches my lifeless
body so it can infect them and
devour them too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Linzi x

    Nice poem, it makes people feel your sadness, xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven

    I love! your poem, is one of a kind, I love your topic and your setting for the poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Amber, I rated this poem a 5/5 simply because the words you chose, the stanza in this line i loved...Sadness, Oh how it overflows
    my body. It runs in my blood
    like a toxic, like a virus, a
    killer virus.

    such beautiful description, it's a sad poem but you got the message out to me. I love this poem even though it's sad. I can feel the pain, the hurt inside.I'm sorry you have to feel this way but hey, chin up little one, I'm always by your side. Keep up the great work and keep the poems coming. I can't wait to read more hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Live the way sadness has been potrayed in this poem. Nice work keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Live the way sadness has been potrayed in this poem. Nice work keep up.