*sniff*
*hug*
ur amazing. u always put so much more into ur poems then i do. honestly, im deeply (thinks of a word) greatful, that u use ur talent to write me a poem, really, thanks. it made me smile. i think this is one of ur best poems. 10/5
Lol....Jesse, isn't it? sounds about right...sigh. he's wonderful, huh? answer: yes. he's helped us all more than he'll ever know...i don't know how we'll ever help him back.
Lost and confused
wishing at least one could see,
as her last desperate attempt she called
"please someone help me."
Then the scene changes again
there's still sadness it implies,
but now she seems different
there's a glimmer of hope in her eyes.
A stranger came to answer her call
and is there to listen,
he gives her advice-
advice she's been missin.