I liked it

It was a little confusing... the "feeling" and even the message was unclear to me almost like you didn't know what u were talkin about. Also u might want to check on your word choice, yuo said "yew".

It was ok but if its not finished I bet it would be better

I liked it.
and actually understood what you ment.
but you should change yew to actually yew.
-Kelsey.

Awww hunny. thats so sad. i know how you feel. keep on writing babe xxx good work x

Wow!!!..so good!!!.it has so much emotion into this..so much power.....i would really like to c this finished if its not allready, so plz let me know when it is!...
great job!
Aly
5/5

I like it. its good. wonder how its going to end up being..

Wow powerful poem
...i have been raped over 13 times and i know how bad this hurts
if you ever need to talk babe im here
5/5 <33