Tells a story

Ohh, thats a hard one, i think you should end it...

secrets of stolen innocence,
of disobedience
of the longing for death.
of a longing
to cut deeper than this

great poem! xx

I liek the last line, thought it ended the poem with very much depth. well done x

~each scar tells a story, can you see it,
a story of screams, unheard, or ignored~
and
~secrets of stolen innocence~
are sum very deep wordz
i adore thiz poem