I don't like the end..you shouldn't have had to wake up from that dream, jesse..

Movements and heartbeats
Life-threateningly slow
Thoughts race with the moonlight
Reflect, blue eyes glow

^ well...you already know what i would say. so don't even bother asking..lol.

great job, jesse.
about five minutes ago i tried to write a moonlit beach poem. too bad it sucked. lol. great job.

Wow, very peaceful sweet. great job! 5/5
xoxo
~me~