Comments : Do I Mystify You, Dear Reader?

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lol. you made me smile......what's the first best thing you can do with ur lips? lol. jk..

    Dear reader
    Can you feel it?
    How can it be?
    Not felt in a while
    Takes the breath out of me

    ^ deeeeep breath.....wow.

    great job, jesse..wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Yey!!!!! JessIe smiles!!!! this poem is my absolute favotite!! just becase i can imagin u smiling, and with a heart as big beautiful as urs...the smile has 2 match!!! rember.....
    ~don't ever frown 'cace u never know whose falling in love with ur smile~
    great poem! and yes, everything u write just pulls the reader in and just hits them with many emosions. great work! 5 billon/5
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Hee, hee second best thing, i am the reader, and you amaze me! :]