Awwww i love it!

This poem was very well done.
I dont like alot of sad poems,
but this one just makes sense!
great rhythm and great flow.
I like how you repeated at the end..
all because this world isn't fair,
It has everything to do with the poem!

I didn't expect the ending, good job

Wow. U never stop surprising me with ur poems. This was really a powerful poem. It's was deep and as u know it sorta hit's close 2 home 4 me. Even though u made the poem in a way that they person died, I saw it a different way. Even ppl cut,... when I cut, sometimes I feel like that cut is so deep that it's going 2 be the end. But what I 4get 2 realize that every time I pick up that blade I'm already there. Idk, but that's that I saw out of ur poem. Either way that u put it, it was still an amazing job. Ur flow was really good, ur use of words, everything. 5/5

.:Rach:.

A very well written piece of poetry 5/5 an amazing choice of words

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

WOWWW!!!! I love this poem soooo much. I how you used a razor to end your pain and the ending OMG is jst crazy. I llove how you said you are having an affair with your razor. This is just a deep and intense poem. Life is like that sometimes and it does cause us to have some deep cuts that we feel won't heal. This is an amazing poem. I think some art work should go with this poem. Maybe somehing in black and white but have the blood from the wrists in a deep dark red. Think about it.

WOWWW!!!! I love this poem soooo much. I how you used a razor to end your pain and the ending OMG is jst crazy. I llove how you said you are having an affair with your razor. This is just a deep and intense poem. Life is like that sometimes and it does cause us to have some deep cuts that we feel won't heal. This is an amazing poem. I think some art work should go with this poem. Maybe somehing in black and white but have the blood from the wrists in a deep dark red. Think about it.