The Nightmare I would Embrace

by ilu   Apr 6, 2008


Last night I fell fast asleep
I was dreaming and it is really deep
I saw your face and I suddenly smile
Finally I can be with you even for a while

I saw you cry and I want to hold you tight
I want to kiss you to make you feel alright
But when I touched you, you flinched away
I want to sound angry but I have nothing to say

I saw you mad and I want to kiss you goodnight
I want to be there until the end of twilight
But when I try to be close, you said you've made your choice
I want to scream that I love you but I couldn't find my voice

I look at you as you embrace her tight
I was hurt to I cry under the sky so light
I just wish you were right about her
The one who'll always be there to make you feel better

I want you to know that my love for you is as bright as the moonbeam
Even though I can only be with you through this dream
I wouldn't want to wake up and stay in this amazing place
Because this is the kind of nightmare I would embrace..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good poem, you should try not to use a lot of I's in your poem coz it messes up the flow :)

    Try using 'ing'

    By using 'ing' it will enhance the flow of your poem.

    Example:
    I look at you as you embrace her tight
    = Looking at you as you embrace her tight

    Also since your poem is past tense all your words need to be in the past tense :)

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