I think if this is your image about God, it is pretty cruel ( I don't mean to offend you by saying this). You know...so far in any religion (I think) God only will punish only the people who have done wrong.. So far I think God is Merciful and Compassionate towards to good people.

What I feel about your poem is that you might feel guilty about something.. When I feel I have done wrong/ I am doing wrong I see God punishing me..

This is great poem, a lot of thoughts and emotions. Well done. :)

Really, I think you're an amazing poet--this is a rich poem...I can't think of anything to add to it. The way you throw yourself into a character really helps the story. You say things in a way that is just..wow...good job. Crazy good message.

Excellent piece of yours! the introduction couldn't be done any better.. and when i read that i can truly identify myself in that situation.

I'm somehow really in a "little" crisis right now with something called a GOD.. i have lost my faith so far.. and this wonderful poem really makes me think. it feeds my thoughts.. thanks for the inspiration!