A normal;effed up life

by Hollywood   Apr 6, 2008


A normal girl; With a lonely
heart, So confused, On what to
say, I loved you, But that was
not enough...but what more can i say?
what can i do to make you care for me
more? A girl and a boy that
can no longer be, He abused
her, He tied her up, And nocked
her up, Then he left her alone to
die, All alone, With no one by
her side!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    Short but you packed all ur usual emotions into it
    ye very well done =)

  • 16 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow....lol a very haunting piece indeed. lol he tied her up? lol wow...you have a very wonderful dark imagination. i love it. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    It's kind of repetative in some parts "On what to say, I loved you, But that was
    not enough...what can i say?" Maybe you could change one of the "say"s to make it sound better. Other than that it was a great write.

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