It's kind of repetative in some parts "On what to say, I loved you, But that was
not enough...what can i say?" Maybe you could change one of the "say"s to make it sound better. Other than that it was a great write.

Wow....lol a very haunting piece indeed. lol he tied her up? lol wow...you have a very wonderful dark imagination. i love it. :)

Short but you packed all ur usual emotions into it
ye very well done =)