Welcome To The White Forest

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 6, 2008


Welcome to the white forest
Where dreams become real
Smell the fresh air
Peace you can feel

Follow the white rabbit
Let him take you away
Vivid white forest
White, never gray

In amazing smiles
In life threating eyes
White forest is home
Until you realize

Until your realize
It's all just a dream
White forest ignites
Flames distort the screams

White forest turns red
A sun in the night
White trees dance bright orange
Spectacular sight
~~~~~~~~~~~
Fire is dimming
White forest now black
Peaceful white forest
Will never come back

White forest was peaceful
Now cold and dead
Once vivid white
Perfect black instead

A single tree
Maybe a forest tomorrow
A shred of hope
Amidst all the sorrow

Just one single tree
Untouched by the flame
A home for some happiness
This tree became

In what's left of the forest
A bird desperately sings
Don't let the flames
Kill the hope this tree brings

Love is the fire of life, it either consumes or it purifies ~unknown

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Ahhh!! wow! that is one emosional roller coeaster!! first u pulled me in2a beautiful peace full place then u set it on fire!!! turning it in2 an fast moveing scary nightmare!!! then it dies down leaving me in this sad, depressing, hopeless place. but just wen u leave me to think that's all it'll ever be...u bring a little bit of hope back! just a little bit but just enough. wow, it describes love perfectly!! u shoul write a sequal!!! 10/5 :]
    xoxo
    ~me~

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    Good, good. I liked how there was a sudden change of events. And the ending, with the bird, was just a wonderful ending. Nice job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    Wow that was really good
    i liked it a lot keep it up [=

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I don't even KNOW where you get this stuff jesse...wow. the title made me smile..then you burned the stinkin forrest on me!! lol. no, but really, it was fantastic....

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