I don't even KNOW where you get this stuff jesse...wow. the title made me smile..then you burned the stinkin forrest on me!! lol. no, but really, it was fantastic....

Wow that was really good
i liked it a lot keep it up [=

Good, good. I liked how there was a sudden change of events. And the ending, with the bird, was just a wonderful ending. Nice job =)

Ahhh!! wow! that is one emosional roller coeaster!! first u pulled me in2a beautiful peace full place then u set it on fire!!! turning it in2 an fast moveing scary nightmare!!! then it dies down leaving me in this sad, depressing, hopeless place. but just wen u leave me to think that's all it'll ever be...u bring a little bit of hope back! just a little bit but just enough. wow, it describes love perfectly!! u shoul write a sequal!!! 10/5 :]
xoxo
~me~