Until i get her back

by Baby Rainbow   Apr 6, 2008


I wont stop crying, until i get her back
i wont stop failing, until i get her back
i wont stop blaming myself, until i get her back
i wont stop cutting myself, until i get her back

i have stopped smiling, until i get her back
i have stopped laughing, until i get her back
i have stopped trying, until i get her back
i have stopped hoping, until i get her back

i will stop breathing, until i get her back
i will stop sleeping, until i get her back
i will stop eating, until i get her back
i will stop living...then its too late to get her back

saffie
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  • 16 years ago

    by This Mask I Hold Is Not Held Tight

    I dont know why no-one has commented this! I actually like it! its different and unique!

    I like the repetition through the poem although it does seem a little "full-on". But on the other hand it suits the poem very well!!

    You have created a brilliant poem! your choice of words are FAB =)

    4 from me :) great job hun =)

    ~ This Mask I Hold Is Not Held Tight ~

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