It ' s The Way His Eyes Dance Across My Face .

by ABake   Apr 7, 2008


It ' s not my fault this time -- You have made it hard for me to breathe over and over again , but you won ' t be
the man you always claimed to be ; Pushing me down stairs and breaking my heart just was not enough for your already too big ego . I recall telling you I could only take so much ; Once I am gone , I am gone for good sweetheart --

I can see the tears welling up behind your suddenly pain stricken eyes ; I am hesitant to believe you are actually hurt , it could be tears of happiness -- You sure are repeating yourself a lot Hun , are you feeling alright ? [ Wishing Over And Over On A Faded Star ] Your love is fading ; So I am guessing that star is influencing you -- What happened to us baby ?

Fantasizing about the day when I run into your open arms and you accept my embrace -- What kind of girl would I be if I didn ' t dream though ? You ' re staring at my hands , then my face . Your eyes are doing some kind of dance all over my body : It ' s quite mesmerizing to my real side , because for once I am starting to look after my heart . I want to be with you , but honey , I [ refuse ] to let you hurt me again . . .

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  • 16 years ago

    by LitxUpxWithxLife

    This poem nails some of the duality that we face in relationships: the love, and the hurt. I liked how you hint at some of his emotions while at the same time keep it from your perspective. Nice Job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh that final stanza just blew me away with its beautiful words! Flying into a loves embrace and hoping it accepts you is a young dream in every girls heart. You want the guy that occupies your whole being to accept you but sometimes you cannot be soo sure.

    The message behind it was quite easy for me to relate with. I do think your sentences in the first stanza were a bit wordy but nothing that threw off the flow or affected the poem for me. Jus tfrom reading your other poems I know your potential and it is amazing. Just read over it a few times and it will be clear to you.

    Again I loved the brackets and the words like "baby" and "hun" added a nice touch to this piece. Overall an amazing read as always.

    Well done *5/5*

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