Oh that final stanza just blew me away with its beautiful words! Flying into a loves embrace and hoping it accepts you is a young dream in every girls heart. You want the guy that occupies your whole being to accept you but sometimes you cannot be soo sure.

The message behind it was quite easy for me to relate with. I do think your sentences in the first stanza were a bit wordy but nothing that threw off the flow or affected the poem for me. Jus tfrom reading your other poems I know your potential and it is amazing. Just read over it a few times and it will be clear to you.

Again I loved the brackets and the words like "baby" and "hun" added a nice touch to this piece. Overall an amazing read as always.

Well done *5/5*

This poem nails some of the duality that we face in relationships: the love, and the hurt. I liked how you hint at some of his emotions while at the same time keep it from your perspective. Nice Job. 5/5