Broken heart

by unknownlove   Apr 7, 2008


From the minute i saw you i knew you were mine.
it only took one date, i couldn't get you off my mind.
the more we talked, my love for you grew.
who would have thought I'd confess my love for you.

i should have listened when you said we wouldn't workout.
but i said to you, i thought that's what chances were about.

but you made up your mind i wasn't the one.
& all i could do was cry because you & i were done.

so i decided to move on & be strong.
but thats when everything just went wrong.

you called me four days later & told me you were sad.
i took you back, & everyone grew mad.

my love for you made me insane
but two weeks later my heart was back in pain.

my best friend told me that you had a girlfriend.
my heart broke in pieces because finally this was the end.
months went by, you and her seemed so happy.
& here i sit left to feel empty.

my first poem EVER. hope you like =)

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  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenWingAng3L

    Very touching, I love it~ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Can really relate to this poem! its so awsum! dont give up on writing cause this was excellent! great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kiley

    This poem is AWESOME.
    :D
    i can relate soo much.
    cause this is exactly what happened with me and someone.
    haha.
    nice job! :)
    keep writing cause i can tell you're good. :'D

    -kiley

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Good job i loved the flow of it.looks like you'll be a great poetess

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Nicely written first poem n how many ppl died n still died of a lonely disease called... broken heart.

    Nicely done..

    Keep writing..

    N best wishes after this first poem to every single poem u write..

    Karan