I love it it matches something that happened to me i live it really alot!!!

It's a really sad but well written poem. Hearbreak and pain are a part of life but one day you'll find that some1 specail that will keep your heart whole for the rest of your life. Take care and keep writing! 5/5

Sigh* getting heart broken is not the verybest. yes its very painful but we all have to suffer from it at a time in our life. but its a good poem.

Nicely written first poem n how many ppl died n still died of a lonely disease called... broken heart.

Nicely done..

Keep writing..

N best wishes after this first poem to every single poem u write..

Karan

Good job i loved the flow of it.looks like you'll be a great poetess

This poem is AWESOME.
:D
i can relate soo much.
cause this is exactly what happened with me and someone.
haha.
nice job! :)
keep writing cause i can tell you're good. :'D

-kiley

Can really relate to this poem! its so awsum! dont give up on writing cause this was excellent! great job. 5/5

Very touching, I love it~ 5/5