by StandStill
Your reader did laugh, of course. i love it...very whimsical and light. what i like to see from you, jesse...smile...great job. |
Awww, very sweet poem. wat i really like about ur newer poems is that u reach out 2 the reader by adressing them. that makes it really uniqe and keeps the reader reading closly. 5/5, great work |
Really sad, but this was your first poem i read when i knew what the metaphore was before you told me |