That was a gorgeously-sad piece =( But an amazing write, it could do with some full stops, however, I love all the emotion and the imagery;

Nobody looks at her that way, she's not warm nor good
too ragged to be beautiful like other girls, different
and different in this world, this beach, means ugly,
it means she's alone, no hand to hold, the world indirect

That is my favorite stanza, because I can really relate to it, I loved it 100% ^^

Take care,
Lizzy,
xxxx