Amazingly done with a vast of vocabz used...Honestly speakin i dint like the last 2 or last line...The endin was not that interesting but the whole poem itself was fantastic..Imaginatively done bu filled wit deep sadness..And i think it was too long but all in all, you are a great writer that knows how to put your emotions into a thousand words..Good job..

I appreciate your expressions....

Shirani