I AM *

by Lady Remix   May 24, 2004


I am the air you breath,
and the water you drink.
My force is as strong as 1000 men,
I am ever so powerful.
Can you feel it?
The pressure around your heart,
not letting you free?
Can you feel your pulse rising;
beating slowly at first then faster and faster,
about to explode?
I can.
I can feel the blood rushing throughout your whole body,
giving you life and energy.
I can feel your pain,
I can sense your fear, your obsessions, and your fantasies.
I am all that and so much more,
I am sweetness, forgiveness, compassion and respect,
I AM LOVE

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  • 20 years ago

    by Reubin

    Its not to bad at all . i really liked it. i was just reading your comment on my poem and i can see your point . Im a white male born in Russian and immigrated to Canada and i see this everyday in my highschool and its sad that women think that they have to do these things and the sad thing is alot of girls like guys who treat them like shit and its wrong...it was a reallt deep and emotional poem for me becuase in Russian even though its a poor country its not likt that women are treated with respect and people who have everything here live like that. thats all i got to say...........Reubin

  • 20 years ago

    by Lady Remix

    Hey everyone. Read, Vote, And Comment on this. I really hope you like it. Someone told me it wasn't that great, but I would like to know what some other people think. I won't take it into offense if you do tell me that it sucks.

    Thank You

    Lady Remix