Allergic to you

by Dark Secrets   Apr 7, 2008


New to my heart
A magical disease
Doctors said I was allergic
Turns out I'm allergic to you

Ears burning when I see you
My face is all red
My heart racing hard
smashing into my thorax

My tongue in twines
To the back of my throat
Holding speech from emerging
as well as my breath

My body shakes in a fever
I couldn't write if I wanted
My hands tremble and quake
and my body continues to sweat

If you approached I'd collapse
Of shortage of breath
Or I'd just stay still
As my heart comes to a halt

New to my heart
A magical disease
Doctors said I was allergic
Turns out I'm allergic to you

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was an awesome poem! I love how you described it as being allergic to the person. I've never thought of it that way before. Great write!

    -Morgan-

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow, it is really wonderful, keep up with these emotions

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Marvelous piece of writing! I just loved the first stanza and your flow just mading reading much easier and also such a pleasure. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Zoe

    Gah! i adore this! i can relate to these feelings so easliy...good job
    keep it up
    5/5
    x!x

  • 16 years ago

    by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

    That was a great poem. i loved it:)

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