by ayla
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Hi. You know i read through this poem a couple of times, and i must say for once i was surprised by a poem written by one as young as yourself,the only unsurprising part is the self harm part. Almost every teen on this site seems to write about it and i think its been done to death. I think the quality of your writing is excellent compared to many on this site, and other than a couple of spelling and grammatical mistakes your poem seemed to be well thought out and beautifully written. Grant |