Kinda eerie. like, whoa. lol nice

I like it,its different

Whoa... man this was strong n very dark. i imagine in my mind full of blood too. it does have a lot og anger and hate here. it makes the poem more intense and out there. i really love it. awesome job. but just try breathing deep okie. please keep it up with the awesome poem. clam dwn with the anger.

TaKe CaRe Plz,
Frenchy