My life of a dream

by Marcus blake   Apr 7, 2008


Like a door to a prison with a reason
A solution that is driven
To succeed and believe
That a dream can be more than it seems
Like a life to the days that I pray
To give out and I shout
At the ones that I hate
With a passion and everlasting
I'am so blind to the vision of the world
Turn apart separated subjugated
With the key I ask please
Show me the world you dream

(Try reading it like each line is chained after your done)

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  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is a very good piece, and the imagery is so clear in my mind as i read each line, again the closing lines are very powerful and the whole piece is excellently written 5/5