Lost

by Lance   Apr 7, 2008


I'm standing here inside my maze
no way out, my thoughts a haze
should i stop or stay on course
voices screaming loud and hoarse
telling me to go all ways
around in circles for many days
I found a way and then i turned
my mind gave out...my stomach churned
i sat down and let out tears
pushing out all my fears
inside my mind a button pressed
just work your hardest and be the best
within the hour i was free
no longer scared, i turned the key

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is amazing. It is deep and to me it does feel complete not to contridict anyone. I love it, nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was very deep. i liked 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    I really like this poem. Its flows really well and your choice of words are just great. The rhymes make it perfect and help enhance on the flow, really great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakEven

    Very interesting.. love it :) 5/5

  • Nicely writen good job 5/5

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