Comments : Lost

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This sounds unfinished to me. I think you could add more onto it, tell a little bit more about the story.
    It also sounds a lot like you are trying to force the rhymes. Don't do that unless it is absolutely neccessary.
    Still get a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by bill

    Love it!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Wow. . .Thats amazing:O

    Your an amazing writer. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Diz

    I like....well done :-)
    I only wish i had the courage you had.....

  • Nicely writen good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BreakEven

    Very interesting.. love it :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    I really like this poem. Its flows really well and your choice of words are just great. The rhymes make it perfect and help enhance on the flow, really great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was very deep. i liked 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this is amazing. It is deep and to me it does feel complete not to contridict anyone. I love it, nice job