This sounds unfinished to me. I think you could add more onto it, tell a little bit more about the story. |
by bill
Love it! |
by Danielle
Wow. . .Thats amazing:O |
by Diz
I like....well done :-) |
Nicely writen good job 5/5 |
by BreakEven
Very interesting.. love it :) 5/5 |
by Andrew
I really like this poem. Its flows really well and your choice of words are just great. The rhymes make it perfect and help enhance on the flow, really great work. |
Wow that was very deep. i liked 5/5 |
by BlueJay
Wow, this is amazing. It is deep and to me it does feel complete not to contridict anyone. I love it, nice job |