by Nathanilliam Apr 7, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
I don't have anything to vent |
Short...Try adding some different words to it..But its still a really nice poem |
by Dookie
Luv it its fknn rad i get it |
Thats cool....your poem makes alot of sense ....its always good to never let a bad day work up a whole life time of situations...good job! |
by x Mo x
Good poem Nathan! I like how it all fit together. It wasnt all smooth and flowing, but it wasnt choppy and annoying! |