I <3 Rise Against, they are an amazing band, you have a very good taste in music lol |
by Cindy
Kaylee |
by Jason Meres
Such wonderful comparisons drawn between the true pain of heartache in the cold, lonely, and dark midnight hours. I get a picture in my head of the desert when the night creeps in and the temperature drops, a wasteland of all comforts, much like a broken heart. |
by Elapsed
Wow.. What a deep and intense piece this was. A awesome expression of such bitter pain and sorrow.. |
Truly powerful from the beginning to the end. Your choice of words is superb in each stanza and the flow that you created is simply flawless. |
by Ingrid
Kaylee, |
by Blissful
I love how the message is not clear here after initially reading it and it compellled me to read it again. The mood you created with your choice of words was flawless and nicely coexisted with your message and imagery. I could really feel the emotions you wished to protray .. they were deep, full of hurt and meaning. The style was different as was the topic which was refreshing to read because sometimes I get tried of reading the same thing day in and day out .. I love reading your word because it is so different and actually takes some thinking power to figure out .. I enjoy the imagery in this piece because it was so filled with sorrow and darkness that it just lured me out of my reality and transported me into another world. Well done my dear .. another amazing piece by you. *5/5* |
by Sherry Lynn
I had to read this several times. That is actually a very good thing. I love the freshness that you have presented with this piece. |
by Leah20
I love these lyrics. Awesome job! I can't wait to read more. |
Marvellous....... From 007 |
by Krathia
VERY good, the imagery was mystically haunting and the poem overall was beautiful. |
by debbylyn
So very moving and beautiful to read. Metaphorically awesome and hauntingly sad. |
by Melpomene
This was a touching piece. Truely. I think you work so well with emotion. You know how to express yourself. Unlike me. I loved the metaphors used. I found them to be quite different and unique. |
by Nix
Wow! I actually read just a few of your poems but this when still impressed me most of all pieces I read from you. Whole poem is filled with excellently expressed emotions and I think that you done very refreshing and truly original job. |
I hope you like honest comments. |
Very nicely written. The flow was good, however; I felt it could of been a lot better with the assistance of puncuation through out. The structure was good as well as the imagery created in this poem. |
by Sarah
A well written & beautifully penned poem ! Great job keep it up 5/5 |
by Sarah
Well written and beautifully penned 5/5 keep it up |
by Rachel RTVW
I loved your use of a metaphor in this thought provoking piece. Excellent word choice and flow! Outstanding! |
by XxHiis BooxX
I love this poems great write 5/5 xD |