Built up

by Nathanilliam   Apr 8, 2008


Sometimes I just let it all build up.
Never telling anyone whats up.
And soon I'll be all fed up.
Telling everybody else to shut up.
Eventually I'll give up.
And my time will be up.

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow. That's so true! I know what you're feeling. You really should just let it all out! I do it too, I just build up until I snap. I think a lot of people do. You really described and related to a lot of people. Great job!

    I liked the usage of the word "up." It had a nice rhythm!

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