Wow. this is simply amazing. the metaphor can be taken any way the reader needs, so it is relatable to anybody who's seen a rose...which is like...everyone! lol.

A rose, so delicate, not even one thorn.
this rose now bloody and torn.

^ definitely loved the way this started. it goes from beautiful, simple, sweet and in one line, BAM! it's all torn away. which is really just amazing.

great job. 5/5

Great work great title xx