Comments : Alive

  • 16 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Aww this is a cute little poem. short and sweet. good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow great poem
    i loved this part
    I want to look into you eyes
    and get lost inside your soul
    I want you to take me away
    for you to have control

    keep up the good work
    5/5