Its a nice poem, but I would have spelled everything out and not use caps all the time and I wouldnt put 'that is' in fornt of "Think that they love you" I think that sounds good without the 'that is'

3/5

~Victoria

Much better. *clap* Just remeber to spell things out and not USE ALOT OF CAPS seeing how it means that your yelling it. (that was just an exaple I'm not yelling at you.)