Thats cute! Great love poem! It totally explains a lot of people's feelings! It makes sense! great write!

Hey, on the part
"We don't stare at each other
most the time."
if you insert an "of" so it reads "most of the time" itd sound better.

Thanks. fixed

Hmm..i like the message u try to convey through this poem. but i think it would be better if u added some length, and a bit more of emotion to it.....it doesnt really flow, but thats ok, i kinda have a problem with that too...lol...yeah, so good job.
4/5
Aly