These three stanzas of the whole poem are well written
When you yell
And we always fight
I'm always wrong
And you're always right

You tell me to do this
And tell me to do that
I will always listen
I'll never talk back

When you scream
I learned to give in
I know you'll hit me
If I don't let you win

Keep it up , i liked ur poem
5/5
biya

Crazy write really good tho.

Nicely done!!! Take care of your baby!! God bless you and your future family...

I really liked this. Its nicely done, sad, but a good and true write. Keep it up. 5/5