Good job....

~I'm saying how I feel
That if there was a way
But there's no fairytale
Not that I deserve one, anyway~
**u do deserve a fairytale, idk wat else i can say 2 u.** but i luv the quote at the bottem, it's by my all time favorite!! well another great poem. u know i can relate 2 almost every1 of ur poems...i guess that makes me a hipercrite lol. but all i'm trying 2 say is, ur poems reach out 2 me. some make me feel like i'm not alone cause i can relate, some help me understand my own feelings myself, some take me to a whole new world which is something i need lol, and some just make me forget myself completly and think only of u and ur feelings which is very refreshing lol. anyway 5/5
xoxo
~me~

I loved every stanza. it was perfect. entirely heartbreaking and very deep. amazing flow. and amazing quote by u...

Last words of a poem
Always break my heart
I think poetry
Is a broken art

i just love it ^

the last words of this poem did break my heart. beautiful title as well.

5/5! :)