by Sammie Moore May 24, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears streaked down her bruised face. What had she done to deserve such pain and torture? She had loved him! She loved him with her entire soul and body. She had Killed for him! And now she was learning why, the boy she had killed in the name of love for her boyfriend, was in fact her lovers son from a one night stand. How could he betray her like this? How could she have been so stupid to believe all of his lies? So she confronted him, wanting to end the emotional pain, and the relationship as well. But he hit her, and entirely beat her for threatening to leave him. She couldn't take the beatings, so she stabbed him through the heart which she thought had loved her. Then seeing what she had done, stabbed herself as well. God Forgive Her. |
it's a long story as to why i commented twice. it was an accident. sorry. btw, thx for the comments on my poems. |
i like it. your writing has it's own unique style. you have great visual effect, and you're jotting some deep lines. your really talented. nicely done. |
i like your style. your writing has great visual effect, and you're dropping some deep lines. your stuff is pretty tight. nicely done. |