The Unamed Feeling

by mier   Apr 8, 2008


Gremlin lines of obscured heresy,
whispered in the muted abyss of tortured lips.

Tiptoe. Tiptoe in the soft twilight of silent lunacy.
Blink. Twice.

Can you see me through the glass in your eyes?

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    So short
    but so much was said
    excellant word choice
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, wow, amazingly done, so short but core of this is priceless... Truly original and remarkable piece, I admire your way with words, this is endlessly powerful and you said So much with so little words, I am honestly left in awe, amazed by extreme beauty of this lines.
    Every word is picked incredibly, I absolutely think that this is so deep and simply, my new favorite poem, so creative. I don't know where you got idea for it, but is is impressionable, ending impressed me, and start, and truly each line, bravo!!!
    This deserve so much more than usual 5/5

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