On that dance floor

by makayla   Apr 8, 2008


I trusted you.
i let myself get attached.
i told you i didn't want to but you said i would regret it if i didn't .
you guessed wrong i regretted it because i let it happen.
you were so cute and funny and all i did was smile around you.
then that girl came around again and i lost all control.
you dumped me right there in that room.
on that dance floor where i watched you lie to my face and break my heart.
i let you get inside my head.
i let you get in there and screw everything up.
i had the best life until i let you get inside my head.
thanks a lot, but i don't need another person inside my head.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aryaan

    It's good emotional writing... but try to write in a more compact way.

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    Great poem! I love it. Keep writing :)